Wednesday, July 06, 2011

Murdock Valley

Relentless sun heats sage until a swirl
of hot air goes up the drain in a dust devil.

A vulture stops flying and glides around
the plume, tasting flavors from the valley floor,

a jackrabbit, four-wing saltbush,
a dried out deer carcass, the algae at Fish Springs,

a ranch hand wrapped in Irish Spring
riding a nasty old mule. The vulture grips

the rising heat and swirls into upper layers
where flavors ferment and mature,

where vultures have special dreams,
I ride a nasty old mule to Murdock Ranch

and give Sadie a taste of Irish Spring.
“You never,” she says, “cease to amaze.”

5 comments:

Sheilagh Lee said...

that about sums it up you never cease to amaze that last line crept up on me then made me smile.

oldegg said...

What a superb poem this is with interesting repetitive themes. Glad he used Irish Spring to ensure Sadie had no complaints.

mindlovemisery said...

I love the character of this poem, its wonderful

Kim Nelson said...

I live in the Sonoran Desert. This spoke to me.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/07/09/altered-reverie/

wordcoaster said...

A talking mule? Nice. :)