Jennifer says
do you still
love me
~
whitewater cascades
around rocks and eddies –
black hole
~
Diamond Craters west of Crane –
Rock Wren call’s in and out
~
six black holes
around the table –
chug, guzzle, munch
~
ocean craters
swallow whitecaps,
surfboards spit out
~
I watch Jennifer
walk out –
door latch clicks
Sunday, July 03, 2011
Crater Ku
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5 comments:
all the little verses work well together for a coherent whole.
cute, brilliant job.
Very well done. All of your verses fed into the next. The last stanza says it all. Awesome!
Love the unifying qualities of this bit:
six black holes
around the table –
chug, guzzle, munch
Nicely done.
I read somthing different and unique after a long time.. thanks..
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