the full moon
at twilight –
rhymes with orange
~
spring desire
reflects
in summer eyes
~
plum blossoms
fall
into autumn wine
~
two blackbirds
in the market
picking, picking
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6 comments:
Lovely nature pictures you've painted here. Seemingly random, but connected - clever to avoid use of "echo" in the poem itself. My favourite is
plum blossoms
fall
into autumn wine
Gorgeous!
Beautiful imagery here...you create such a vivd tale through your words. Nicely written.
I like the idea of wine being an echo of the plum tree. I hear the other echoes too.
spring desires reflects in summer eyes...
beautiful lines,
magical echoes.
echoes of seasons of the year...very well said...:-) I like them all....
I was taken with:
"two blackbirds
in the market
picking, picking"
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