Monday, November 15, 2010

Echo Ku

the full moon
at twilight –
rhymes with orange

~

spring desire
reflects
in summer eyes

~

plum blossoms
fall
into autumn wine

~

two blackbirds
in the market
picking, picking

6 comments:

gospelwriter said...

Lovely nature pictures you've painted here. Seemingly random, but connected - clever to avoid use of "echo" in the poem itself. My favourite is

plum blossoms
fall
into autumn wine


Gorgeous!

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful imagery here...you create such a vivd tale through your words. Nicely written.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

I like the idea of wine being an echo of the plum tree. I hear the other echoes too.

Jingle Poetry said...

spring desires reflects in summer eyes...

beautiful lines,
magical echoes.

Amity said...

echoes of seasons of the year...very well said...:-) I like them all....

Ted Puffer said...

I was taken with:

"two blackbirds
in the market
picking, picking"