(a dungeon made so that the only way in or out is a trap door at the top)
Dismal Swamp –
a Pitcher Plant buzzes
inside and out
~
in a nest
a falcon shifts –
chicks discover sky
~
a gopher hole
in the meadow grass –
a hawk perches
~
this brain hole
I dig
Sunday, June 13, 2010
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7 comments:
What imagery! I loved this.
this brain hole
I dig
So do I.
Great imagination.
Stellar 'ku.
excellent, specially the second
Nice, sparse - leaves lots of room (open holes) for the reader to fall through.
Absolutely amazing. I love the images you've created. I agree with Harshad, "the brain hole" is a phrase that's going to stick with me.
more please
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