Monday, February 01, 2010

Bristol Point

I drive the long cut around the nose
of Bristol Point, gravity pulls me
to the overlook, traffic passes behind,
down into the switchbacks.

From the overlook I see a fishing boat,
lights in Rubble Beach hazed by fog,
an ocean hiding it's purpose.
Behind me a fog-muffled crack and rumble

of rockslide, and Bristol Point closes
the switchbacks, heals the long cut,
covers the scar. Downhill traffic stops,
some U-turn and head back to Lincoln City.

Flashing lights weave into the switchbacks,
roadside talkers cluster and share melancholy.
Another crack and rumble, and rocks tumble
with the gleeful abandon of a child,

free for the first time in a million years.
Bristol Point sticks its nose in the air
and gravity pulls on the overlook.

6 comments:

Yousei Hime said...

I love the life you've given the Point in this. And you're there to watch it, a smiling observer. Thank you for sharing this.

Gordon Mason said...

Great images and I particularly liked the idea of the Point 'sticking its nose in the air'.

Richard said...

"...an ocean hiding its purpose," is a wonderful line. It conjures the depth (literal and figurative) and mystery of what's below the surface - fathoms deep.

Greyscale Territory said...

Love how this land seems to metamorphosise into a persona wrenching free of earth's chains! Intriguing!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, great observation, I hope nobody got hurt!

Crafty Green Poet said...

wonderful descriptions and I really like how the ending echoes the opening