My girlfriend shut the door before the last
credit card promotion, I forget her name,
she arouses my erroneous zone. I left a red snow
coat at the library last night, walked home
in freezing weather and didn't notice anything
amiss, maybe it's time to write about
end–of-life issues, views from the boarding home,
uh miss have we met? Have you seen the red snow?
Lost souls rise up beyond the clouds, Marjorie
dies in the night, she goes to the Moon. This place
is on the map but it looks different from inside,
the trails are in different places, I try to act
like I've been here before. In human time
rocks don't stretch and yawn, they don't sit up
in bed and watch the sunrise, they don't die
in the night.
Saturday, May 23, 2009
View From The Inside
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Beautiful language and imagery ... I like the view from the inside. Peace, JP/deb
All just a breath away from oblivion. Oblivion I would hope ... unless, far sweeter hope, the 'inside' is larger than the out.
the promptness in the pour nibbled my insides :|
http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/05/22/i-worry-for-her/
Love this line "she arouses my erroneous zone" hehe
i loved it! especially "she arouses my erroneous zone"
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