Monday, January 19, 2009

Inelegant Bird

A US Airways jetliner crashed into the Hudson River after a flock of birds apparently disabled both its engines. Seattle PI headline.

A howling jetliner leaves the ground
and flies up like an inelegant bird,
the howling turns to join a passing flock,

it doesn't fly well with others.
The howling, like an underfed hawk,
plunges in and the flock is reduced

to a scattering of feathers, a scattering
of engine parts reduces the howling.
The howling plunges into a river

like an inelegant bird,
a buzzing-boat swarm
scurries in like small furry things

picking the innards, and a gaggle
of buzzing reporters scavenge the chatter
like pickers at the garbage dump.

4 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Love the last stanza!

gel(Emerald Eyes) said...

Enjoyed reading someone using the news to formulate a poem. I was, of course, glad no passengers were injured, but as a nature lover, I was concerned about those birds.
I second STG. Love the last stanza!

Danika / OpenChannel said...

with all your repetitions you might try writing it as a villanelle!

i like the "gaggle" of reporters. :-)

gautami tripathy said...

If only all news could be written thus!

clearly fading