Monday, January 05, 2009

Deep Shadows

for Monday Poetry Train

I go to Seattle and came back with you
and Chinese takeout. Chopsticks click
into a sweet and sour night,

moon shadows gather in the garden,
a red dress hangs in the closet.
Voices from a troubled past

interrupt and compel you
to drift away like morning fog.
Why do you come back

to the shadows of my dreams?
Bright lights leave deep shadows,
it's just an empty dress.

6 comments:

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

Memories play strange tricks.

I love the line 'Chopsticks click into a sweet and sour night,'

angie said...

Mmmm...I'm loving that chopsticks line, too!

This poem is kinda like Chinese takeout--so good you've got to go back for more.

gautami tripathy said...

You make the mundane so poetic.


Mike thanks, it's really a pleasure to see you posting at Poetry Train.

frenzied entropies

Fledgling Poet said...

I loved this...beautiful poem! The 'chopsticks' line really got me, too. There was such a loneliness in this poem, and I felt is strongly.

ish said...

Ouch. I feel the tang of this one.

Tumblewords: said...

Poignant and powered by melancholy. Nice work!