Wednesday, August 08, 2007

The Cat

The cat doesn't need much door to get in,
he slips by when I go out
to the morning's slant light.

I walk the road down to a thin layer
of ground fog draped over Foster Meadow.
A bird lands in the grass, I don't know

the voice so I move up, the bird moves back,
I move up again and he moves back,
we play this inchworm dance until he wearies

and flies off to the far hedgerow,
and finds a perch past a barbwire fence.
I take the Sand River trail,

a dark-hair woman is already on the path,
she says, "My name is Kate." We crunch the gravel,
listen to bullfrogs and a wren,

I talk about computers and Thai food,
she talks about metaphysics and soccer.
The trail splits and she follows the river

downstream, I turn back to my hut,
I go in and the cat slips out,
he doesn't need much door.

7 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the description about the bird that moves away a bit as you approach, I know that well! I love the first line of the poem too, cat's do sneak through such small spaces!

gautami tripathy said...

I enjoyed the narration.

welcome to my universe said...

Loved the way the lines flowed from one paragraph to the next, loved the mood, loved the slipperiness of the cat!

Constance said...

I like the repetition at the end tying it all back together.:)

paisley said...

i liked the imagery of the path splitting off and kate going with it... casual almost catlike nuances...

tumblewords said...

'I walk the road down to a thin layer
of ground fog draped over Foster Meadow' - this felt like a mini-vacation to me. Nice. The push-pull interaction of cats, birds and people is finely tuned.

Peter said...

This opens and closes well, pardon the pun. The door really works for me.