The cat doesn't need much door to get in,
he slips by when I go out
to the morning's slant light.
I walk the road down to a thin layer
of ground fog draped over Foster Meadow.
A bird lands in the grass, I don't know
the voice so I move up, the bird moves back,
I move up again and he moves back,
we play this inchworm dance until he wearies
and flies off to the far hedgerow,
and finds a perch past a barbwire fence.
I take the Sand River trail,
a dark-hair woman is already on the path,
she says, "My name is Kate." We crunch the gravel,
listen to bullfrogs and a wren,
I talk about computers and Thai food,
she talks about metaphysics and soccer.
The trail splits and she follows the river
downstream, I turn back to my hut,
I go in and the cat slips out,
he doesn't need much door.
Wednesday, August 08, 2007
The Cat
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7 comments:
I like the description about the bird that moves away a bit as you approach, I know that well! I love the first line of the poem too, cat's do sneak through such small spaces!
I enjoyed the narration.
Loved the way the lines flowed from one paragraph to the next, loved the mood, loved the slipperiness of the cat!
I like the repetition at the end tying it all back together.:)
i liked the imagery of the path splitting off and kate going with it... casual almost catlike nuances...
'I walk the road down to a thin layer
of ground fog draped over Foster Meadow' - this felt like a mini-vacation to me. Nice. The push-pull interaction of cats, birds and people is finely tuned.
This opens and closes well, pardon the pun. The door really works for me.
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