for Poetry Thursday
the first night
I saw a wild goose
in a dream
~
coyote clouds
run with
tails down
~
spring storm –
even the rain
wants inside
~
the way Nevada
sits next to Utah
~
how to draw
the place between
her breasts
~
two old posts
held together
by barbed wire
~
the moon watches
the whole story
Wednesday, May 02, 2007
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5 comments:
i think my husband and I are two old posts held together with barbed wire!
an interesting mix of sublime and wit...just like you
very atmospheric, I like how the separate images work together to create the whole.
This is a great sequence, the whole greater than the sum. I think my favorite of all the PT links so far (I'm clicking in order of submission).
Mike -
That was a great little trip through your piece.
You through the doors open on my imagination as I journeyed. It was most refreshing.
Thank you!
...Rob
"spring storm –
even the rain
wants inside"
I simply loved this.
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